Should Teenager Students Get a Private Vehicle?
It has been a trend in a big city that students use their
own vehicle to go to their school. In Jakarta, 60% of students use their own
vehicle (20% drive cars and 40% ride motorcycles). This phenomenon increases
every year. As a result, accidents that are caused by teenagers also increase. Lately,
there was an accident that is caused by a 13-year-old teenager which made 7
people die. This accident inspires the government to set the local regulation
in Jakarta and other cities in Indonesia to forbid high school students to use
a vehicle. Based on polling that was done by a TV local station, there are
still pro and contra about this policy. Some parents are in the same line with
the government while others feel hesitate about it. In this essay, there are advantages
and disadvantages of getting a private vehicle of teenager students that is
supported by parents’ reasons.
From many parents’ perspective, they assume that if they
give a private vehicle to their children, it will save money because they do
not need to spend their money to pay for public transportation. Taking public transportation
like minibus needs to spend around Rp. 10.000,00 ($1) in a day for a student. However, by using their own vehicle like a
motorcycle, they only spend Rp. 25.000,00 ($2.5) for a week (based on my sister
experience). Parents also think that by giving a private vehicle, their
children will be easier to go to their school. They should not wait until
public transportation come to pick them up. Therefore, it is one of the
advantages. If students get a private vehicle, it will not take much money and
time for them to come to their school and go back to their house.
The other reason why parents give a private vehicle to
their children is that it can help them to go mobile because not all of parents
can ride a motorcycle or drive a car. The children can drive or ride their
parents to go to a place that their parents want. For example, when the parents
want to go to the market, or other places, they can ask their children to give
them a drive or a ride. Besides, having a private vehicle really helps them in
emergency situation such as buying medicine for the member of their family who is
sick, going to a place whose no public transportation to go there, or going
somewhere at midnight for an urgent thing. So, parents who give a private
vehicle to their children think it is really helpful for them.
On the other hand, many parents agree with government
policy that forbids high school students to use a vehicle. They think that they
should not give a private vehicle to their children because their children may
forget about their obligation. Children may forget their homework, their house
chores and others because they spend much time hanging out with their friends.
By getting a private vehicle, they think they are free to go anywhere that they
like.
In this daily life, according to my own experience, there
are many students prefer to choose friends who have same background with them.
If a student has his own vehicle like motorcycle, he prefers to choose friends
that have motorcycle too. If he has a car, so he prefers to have friends who
have cars. He just wants to spend his time with his friends that they think
have same backgrounds with him. All of them avoid having a friend that does not
have a motorcycle or a car. As a result, having a private vehicle will cause
different social status among teens in their society.
The last and the biggest disadvantage of getting a private
vehicle of teenager students is accident. The leader of World Health
Organization (WHO) said accident is the third big killer in Indonesia. Many accidents
that killed many people were caused by teens that drive a car or ride a
motorcycle by themselves. Kak Seto, the leader of KPAI, said, “Teens who do not
get license card yet should not drive a car or ride a motorcycle by themselves.
They are still labile. By giving a private vehicle to them, it means we prepare
them to be a killer.” In the other words, giving a private vehicle to teenager
students is not good for their and also others’ safety.
In summary, there are advantages and disadvantages of
getting private vehicle of teens. However, the advantages are not as many as
the disadvantages. Giving a private vehicle to students can help them to go to
some places that they need to go. We have to remind that it also has many
disadvantages for teenager students like forget their obligation, cause social
different status, and get an accident. I, personally, agree with government
policy that forbids students to use a private vehicle because they do not get
license card yet. It means they are not trained to drive a car or ride a
motorcycle yet. Getting a private vehicle is really dangerous for teenager
students’ and other people’s safety.
if we talk about the grammar, I shouldn't check it. because you are the queen of Grammar...:)
BalasHapusyour discussion is very good. it is one of the hottest news recently..:)
woww what interesting story i like it... i think you can put the hot news about Dull's accident for your evidence, but overall i like it.... keep writing :)
BalasHapusI like your topic... in some paragraphs it's better for you to add more proofs...
BalasHapusi'd like to read your topic,, keep writing aling.. :)
BalasHapusi can get your point...
I agree with you Aling. The parents shouldn't allow their children to ride a motorcycle because of many reasons. I'll do it if I have children. hahahahaha
BalasHapusThank you so much for your comments guys... :)
BalasHapusI agree with you Aling,,, :) It will be better if the parents limit their children in having private car,, :)
BalasHapusI like your topic,, :)
that's very good idea, but i disagree with you because my house is quite far from campus hehehe... i know you great as usual
BalasHapusyeah fio,, but I thing you are not teenager at all... you are tante2.. hahahahaa
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in an essay you should put the name of person or organization who did the survey for the data that you use, in your fisrt paragpraph you mention that "60% of students use their own vehicle (20% drive cars and 40% ride motorcycles". who said that? are taking it from other source? if you did the survey or research by your self mention it on your essay. so it is not just a make up data, or not reliable one.
BalasHapusyour statement "In this daily life" in linguistic they called it Pleonasm: you use a redundant word, if you said "daily life" it include "this life or todays life" so just simply say: In daily life
over all, you did it well and I like the way you have developed your ideas
Keep Writing!!