My Hopes
Now, I am studying writing2 in this semester. I can study
this subject because I passed writing1. Even though I have passed writing1, it
does not mean I am good enough in writing. I have many problems in writing.
Because of that, I have some hopes that I want to reach in this subject. They
are about the knowledge, the lecturers, my problem in writing, and my mark.
First, by studying writing2, I hope I get new and more
knowledge in writing. I have already studied writing1 last semester, but it was
not enough to improve my writing skill. So, I need new and more knowledge about
writing itself. As I know, in this semester, I will study some new texts, such
as Hortatory and Analytical Exposition Texts and Discussion Text. Actually, I
have already learned about those types of texts, but I just knew the basic knowledge
about them. By studying writing2, I really hope I can understand those texts
more and get new knowledge.
Second, I hope my lecturers can give more explanations and
more examples about the texts that we are going to study. Also, I hope they can
do some ice breaker in the class because sometimes studying writing with the
serious situation is boring. In addition, if we study with temperamental
lecturers, it is hard for us to catch the material that has given by them.
Then it is about my problem. I hope I can find inspiration whenever
I would like to write. It is the one of my big hopes that I want to reach. My
lecturer ever said, “You will get more if you read more”. So, I need to read
more in order to get more knowledge and inspiration in writing. I promise myself
to find the sources that related to English writing, as many as I can, beside
my lecturers’ explanation.
The last one is my
greatest hope. I hope I can catch the knowledge of writing2 and pass this
subject with a good mark.
Those all are my
hopes in studying writing2 this semester. I wish them will come true. Amiin. However,
I know all of my hopes can be reached based on my effort to get them.
Good, you state your thesis statement clearly, it helps readers knowing what you're going to talk.. but your concluding paragraph is not complete enough because you did not restate your points in your body paragraphs...
BalasHapusafter all, I like the way you develop your text... keep on fire...!!!
thaks ty,,, :)
Hapusyou are right....
i hope so...
BalasHapuslet's fighting for writing
i hope so,, keep fighting..
BalasHapusI Think you essay is good, but it is better if you develop you idea and pay attention in punctuation. :) keep writing
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